Just
Call Me Slushy
Note:
the opinions expressed here are my own and do not necessarily
reflect the opinions of the publisher I worked for. But I learned
a lot going through the slush pile, and I wanted to share. More
articles to come soon!
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The
Good, The Bad, and The Ugly Side of Slush
The
Good - Discovery
At
the Illustrator's Conference in 2006, I heard Edward Necarsulmer,
an Agent at McIntosh & Otis, call the slush pile the "discovery
pile." This is a wonderful way to look at it. It helps authors
and illustrators to feel like someone is waiting to discover their
story or illustrations, and it helps those of us going through
the slush pile to remember that there might be a gem hidden in
the huge mountain of manuscripts and art samples.
If
you get lucky enough to find a story that you love, and that your
boss loves (and depending on the publisher, the acquisitions committee
too), it is the most amazing feeling. And then, if you actually
get to publish the book, it's even better. You can say "I
found that book."
You're
probably wondering how to get your book or illustrations discovered
out of the slush pile. And you've probably heard statements about
voice and good writing, and the editor or agent "just knowing"
when they read it. But as an author and illustrator, I know that
those things aren't really helpful, so I'm going to try to give
you a few ideas to help you be discovered out of the slush pile.
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Step One - Passion. Write or illustrate something that you are
passionate about. Passion for a subject, character or time period
really shows through in the writing. Then put it aside, send it
to your critique group, or start revising right away - whatever
method you have for polishing your work. Note: critiques can be
a very valuable part of this process, and sometimes you will need
many critiques and revisions to make your work shine.
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Step Two - Patience and Research. Don't send your work out right
away. Let it sit, and when you take it out again, think about
what type of story it is: boy meets girl, moving/new school, losing
a friend, a new baby, a favorite toy, etc. Then go to the bookstore
and/or library and find current books on those subjects and see
how they handle it. For illustrators, find picture books or cover
art, etc. with subjects or styles similar to yours. Note: reading
is almost as important as writing, and looking at other art is
valuable to illustrators too.
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Step Three - Unique. Think about how you can make your story or
art different than the books you studied. If a publisher has ten
stories about moving to a new neighborhood in the slush pile,
the one that's unusual will stand out more than the other nine
stories about the same thing. And for art samples, the one that
illustrates a character or subject in a new way will capture their
attention, and just might get your sample taped up on the wall.
Note: start to notice which publishers might be right for your
work. Do the books they publish have a similar tone or look?
*Step
Four - Finalize. Get people to critique your work, or at the very
least, to proof-read the final copy. I saw many manuscripts and
art samples that were not ready to be submitted to publishers
because they needed more revising, or weren't age or subject appropriate.
I also saw several novels with blank pages, lines running through
the printing, or other printer made mistakes that were in the
middle of the manuscript, so the author didn't see them. Make
sure all your pages look the way they should before you send them
out. Note: research to make sure that the publishers publish what
you want to send them. Remember to follow the submission guidelines,
and for writers, always include an SASE.
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Step Five - Seasoned Pros. Some of you are probably saying, "I've
heard all that before, and I still get form rejections."
OR "I'm already published, I know all this stuff." For
you, I would suggest focusing on step one and step three. To me,
unique stories that the writer was passionate about jumped out
from the slush pile. It didn't always mean that we could publish
the story (I wish we could publish everything we liked) but it
was more likely to get a personal letter or revision request.
And for the artists, a unique character, or style of art that
the illustrator is obviously passionate about is something that
grabs you, even at first glance. Note: I saw many subs from published
writers that broke obvious manuscript formatting and submissions
guidelines.
The
Bad - Help!
As
an author / illustrator, I know what it's like to desperately
want to get your book published. However, having seen the other
side of things, I now realize that the slush pile is a huge, neverending
thing. What you are competing against is time. The time it takes
to go through (and send back) inappropriate, poorly targeted,
and not yet ready submissions. There is only so much time, and
books that are already contracted are higher on the priority list
than submissions. Even a picture book takes time to read. You
want to be able to give each submission serious consideration,
which is hard to do if you have just finished reading a ton of
other books in the pile. Sometimes you need to take breaks from
the slush to regain your objectivity.So, even though it's hard,
try to be patient with waiting for responses ... and send out
simultaneous submissions when you are able to.
The
Ugly - Trends
I
have seen things that make me wonder how publishers can continue
to accept unsolicited submissions, like no SASEs in a high percentage
of subs, poorly targeted submissions, and people who write, "I
know you don't publish this kind of thing, but ..." In the
future, there may be changes in how the children's publishing
industry works, or stricter submission guidelines - with automatic
rejections for not following the rules. The number of closed houses
and publishers who don't send responses unless they are interested
keeps growing. Maybe we can stop these trends if, as authors and
illustrators, we submit professional packages that are well written,
illustrated, targeted, and have the SASE included. At least I
hope that will help.